雅思写作范文7分文

来源：石家庄环球雅思学校 时间：2013-02-22

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主题

        有些人说,年长的人们应该和他们成年的孩子生活在一起。其他人说他们不应该。你认为啊是一个很好的选择。

文本(257字)

Topic

         Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice.

TEXT（257 Words）

         一个在日常生活中的主题就是不管老年人是否应该和他们成年的孩子一起生活。我的答案是这个问题是,好对他们来说不是。

        首先,不同年龄的人有不同的方式生活。老人们想要一个安静的、和平和有规律的生活,而年轻的喜欢噪音、活动和放纵的享受。如果他们住在一起,老人也许觉得他们总是被干扰而年轻人会觉得,他们往往是残疾人。

        其次,不同的几代人有不同的观点和价值观。对于孩子们来说什么是相对正常的父母似乎是老式的或错误事情。当他们住在一起,他们可能不同意事项从次要的事务与和国际问题。因此,家庭生活可能让人不快,甚至都无法忍受老年人和年轻人。

         后但很重要的一点,成年的孩子,就像他们的父母,爱好独立和自由,但他们的父母仍然把它们作为儿童和无意干涉他们的事务。情况会更糟,如果成年子女都已经结婚。在这种情况下,孩子们已经建立了一个新的和封闭的世界而任何外界干扰可能会导致冲突。

         通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:如果父母和他们的成年子女不住在一起,两个老人和小孩的可以享受完整的独立和自由,过一种生活,他们就像,原封不动地保留他们对彼此的感情。

        One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.

        Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

       Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

       Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

       From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.

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